Thursday, 30 July 2020

Tiger storm poem

The storm is very fast it is running and ragging pack of Tigers. It is very dangerous and loud like the storm and when the storm is ready it charges the rain is like a Tiger roaring the Tiger is unstoppable. The Tiger made a crashing noise with the roar of its voice it well the Tiger was roaring its voice cracked like it never cracked before its big wide mouth opened with his giant teeth inside well it roared the lightning and thunder struck. The Tiger slipped clumsily in the mud it ran into the wild it made furious noises it was hitting the trees with its tail making them shake.
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  1. Anonymous30 July 2020 at 11:26

    Hi Leon I like you're poem but the words are going off the page and its kinda hard to read so maybe change that.I like you're poem a lot keep up the good writing- Lilley

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